MMO Novel - Gamer/Reader feedback needed

[250 pages in, I can use some test readers on The Illusion Game, a novel that spans two worlds - an MMORPG world and the game company that is working on it.]

The Illusion Game is coming along.  More test readers are needed:

https://www.box.net/shared/st3k8a3kl0

Some of you have downloaded chapter 1 but did not send me any feedback.  I would appreciate it if you sent me e-mail with some constructive feedback.  [email protected]

Thanks.

Tim